Ooh, I really liked this! I kept clicking through the flowers to see what else I could get, and as each item was revealed I got a better sense of who we were before getting on the boat--but at the same time I wondered if each item represents a different person we could be.
Thanks for reading!
The 500 words limit really work here. My initial drafts were slightly more concrete, but as I pared words down I realized that it would be more interesting to keep it vague and open for interpretation. Fit the theme better that way.
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Ooh, I really liked this! I kept clicking through the flowers to see what else I could get, and as each item was revealed I got a better sense of who we were before getting on the boat--but at the same time I wondered if each item represents a different person we could be.
Thanks for reading! The 500 words limit really work here. My initial drafts were slightly more concrete, but as I pared words down I realized that it would be more interesting to keep it vague and open for interpretation. Fit the theme better that way.